Sunday, September 11, 2005

Skeleton Key

Skeleton key...not frightening, freaky. Boy's shaking hand, too scared to stand. Loudly chewing gum distracts just some. Girl hears a sound then turns around. BOOM! a man's there, seen through cracks in her hair. "17 for the gas" that's all he asks. "this isBenny, near dead", that's all Luke said.
Next we walk in the rain. Girl drives Boy insane. Get's splashed by the bus, Girl makes a fuss. We step in the door, water drips to the floor. Clothing is wet, but no one's upset. Pizza we eat, with wet and cold feet. Movie we see on the big screen TV. Ice cream came soon, the credits too. Still raining outside. Boy's mom gives a ride. Safelyt at home and ready for bed. Daddy says "good night my little sleepy head."

1 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

He, nicely said.

I like the fact that you can somerise the day in 2 paragraphs :P

Sun Sep 11, 05:15:00 PM  

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